Band 7 model answer Task 2 · Opinion essay

Should rich countries help poorer ones

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The prompt

Some people believe that wealthy nations have a duty to help poorer countries with aid and investment, while others argue that each country should solve its own problems. What is your opinion?

Band 7 model answer (252 words)

Whether rich nations should assist poorer ones divides public opinion sharply. My view is that wealthy countries do have a clear duty to help, both for moral and practical reasons, but that the help must build independence rather than dependence.

The moral case is genuinely difficult to escape. Much of today's global wealth gap has historical roots in colonialism and one-sided trade, so richer nations are not neutral bystanders to poverty they partly created. Even setting history aside, countries that can vaccinate their children twice over while others cannot vaccinate them once are making a choice, and calling that choice a purely domestic matter does not make it one.

Self-interest points in the same direction. Poverty in one region exports its consequences everywhere: epidemics ignore borders, desperate people migrate, and unstable states become sources of conflict that eventually demand far more expensive intervention. Money spent on clean water, schools and functioning institutions is cheaper than money spent on crises, in the same way that maintaining a roof costs less than rebuilding a flooded house.

The form of help matters as much as the amount, however. Aid that simply ships food or cash can undercut local farmers and entrench corrupt officials. Assistance works when it strengthens what a country can do for itself, through fair trade access, investment in infrastructure and training for teachers, engineers and doctors.

In conclusion, rich countries should help poorer ones because justice and self-interest both demand it, but the goal of good aid is to make itself unnecessary.

Why this reaches Band 7

  • Task Response

    The opinion is nuanced but never vague: help is a duty, "but the help must build independence". Both the moral and practical grounds are developed, and the qualification about aid design adds depth most answers lack.

  • Coherence and Cohesion

    Paragraphs progress from moral case to practical case to conditions, and transitions such as "Self-interest points in the same direction" carry the reader forward without formulaic linkers.

  • Lexical Resource

    Strong collocation and imagery: "neutral bystanders", "exports its consequences", "entrench corrupt officials" and the roof analogy all land precisely.

  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy

    Complex comparative and concessive structures are sustained across long sentences with very few errors.

The one fix to reach Band 7

A Band 6 essay here says aid is good because "we should help each other" and stops. The upgrade to Band 7 is grounding the duty in something concrete, historical responsibility or shared risk, and then following one of those reasons through to its consequence.

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