Band 7 model answer Task 2 · Opinion essay

Is learning a foreign language still worth it

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The prompt

Some people say that learning a foreign language is no longer worthwhile because translation technology is improving so quickly. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Band 7 model answer (254 words)

Instant translation apps can now handle menus, directions and even simple conversations, leading some to conclude that studying a language is wasted effort. I strongly disagree, because translation tools replace only the shallowest function of language learning while leaving its deepest benefits untouched.

Admittedly, technology has genuinely reduced some of the old practical pressure. A tourist no longer needs classroom French to order dinner in Paris, and businesses can email international clients through software that produces serviceable results in seconds. For brief, low-stakes exchanges, the case for years of study has weakened.

However, real communication is precisely where machines still fail. Friendship, negotiation and humour depend on tone, timing and cultural reference, and speaking through a device inserts a barrier at exactly the moments connection matters most. Anyone who has watched a joke die in machine translation understands the difference between converting words and sharing meaning. Moreover, learning a language changes the learner: it builds memory and mental flexibility, and it forces genuine engagement with another culture's way of seeing the world, which no app can install on our behalf.

There is also a practical risk in dependence. Devices lose battery, mishear speech and make errors that the user cannot detect, which is an uncomfortable position in a hospital, a courtroom or a business negotiation.

In conclusion, translation technology has made languages unnecessary for tourists but not for humans who want to connect, think and be trusted across cultures. Learning a foreign language remains one of the most worthwhile investments a person can make.

Why this reaches Band 7

  • Task Response

    The writer concedes the strongest version of the opposing case ("the case for years of study has weakened") before dismantling it, which makes the strong disagreement persuasive rather than one-eyed.

  • Coherence and Cohesion

    The concession-rebuttal structure is signposted cleanly with "Admittedly" and "However", and each body paragraph pursues a single idea to a conclusion.

  • Lexical Resource

    Memorable, precise phrasing such as "serviceable results", "watched a joke die in machine translation" and "converting words and sharing meaning" shows flexible vocabulary well beyond Band 6.

  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy

    A wide range of complex sentences, including "which no app can install on our behalf", handled with near-total accuracy.

The one fix to reach Band 7

Band 6 answers usually ignore the technology argument or wave it away in one line. The move that secures Band 7 is granting the opposing view its best case first, then showing exactly where it stops working.

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