Is space exploration worth the cost
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The prompt
Space exploration costs billions of dollars every year. Some people believe this money would be better spent on solving problems here on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Band 8 model answer (261 words)
Whenever a rocket launches, someone asks how many hospitals the money could have built. The question sounds unanswerable, yet I largely disagree with the view that space budgets should be diverted to earthly problems, because it rests on a false choice and undervalues what exploration returns.
The comparison misleads, first, through scale. Space agencies typically consume well under one percent of national budgets, a fraction of what the same governments spend on subsidies with far weaker results, so cancelling exploration would barely register against poverty or disease. It misleads, secondly, by treating money as the missing ingredient in solving those problems. Hunger and poor healthcare persist mainly because of politics, conflict and weak institutions; a redirected space budget would meet the same obstacles that current aid budgets do.
Meanwhile, the returns from space flow back into precisely the problems critics care about. Satellites now underpin weather forecasting that saves harvests, navigation that moves food and medicine, and climate monitoring without which environmental policy would be guesswork. Beyond the hardware, exploration functions as a demanding engine of invention: technologies from water purification to medical imaging matured under the pressure of making things work in orbit, then quietly improved millions of ordinary lives.
None of this excuses waste, and prestige projects deserve scrutiny like any public spending. But scrutiny is an argument for well-aimed exploration, not for abandoning it.
In conclusion, framing space against hospitals is rhetorically powerful and economically hollow. Exploration costs little, returns much, and increasingly provides the tools we need to manage the very planet its critics want to protect.
Why this reaches Band 8
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Task Response
The essay does not merely disagree; it dismantles the premise of the question ("it rests on a false choice") and then rebuilds the positive case, with every claim extended to its consequence. That full, flexible engagement with the idea behind the prompt is what distinguishes Band 8 from a solid Band 7.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Cohesion is carried by the argument itself: "It misleads, secondly..." and "Meanwhile, the returns..." sequence ideas without a single mechanical linker, and each paragraph ends where the next begins.
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Lexical Resource
Language is precise, natural and occasionally striking: "barely register against poverty", "a demanding engine of invention", "rhetorically powerful and economically hollow". Nothing reads as a memorised phrase deployed for effect.
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Grammatical Range and Accuracy
A wide repertoire of structures, parallel triples, embedded clauses, the compressed final sentence, used with essentially error-free control.
The one fix to reach Band 8
What separates this from a strong Band 7 is not vocabulary but attack: a Band 7 essay accepts the question's framing and argues within it, while this one challenges the framing itself, showing that "space versus hospitals" is a false choice before making the positive case. That willingness to engage with the premise, sustained with precise language, is the Band 8 difference.
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